The Sun

Throughout this term, Room 5 has been working on the success criteria for poetry. Today we have been making sentences about the sun, they had to have sun-like objects, -ing verbs and Adjectives. These are my sentences. The sun is an oven sizzling brightly. The sun is a gold coin spying and blazing. The sun is a fireball boiling and sunny. The sun is a lemon Gleaming and bright. The sun is a ball shining and round. The sun is a light bulb glowing yellow.